This Naruto crossover is like non other. There aren't any spelling mistakes, the storyline is awesome. It's perfect. Keep posting it.
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I have actually decided to post exclusively on fanfiction.net
You can find it there under the same name, but I suggest rereading it because I did a rewrite a few weeks ago, editing the parts I didn't like. Same story, just tighter dialogue and less clunkiness (I hope).