Review for hybrid theory

hybrid theory

(#) Trinda 2006-08-29

Ummm, I think you need to re look at your chapter. I think you missed a section after Delilah said she was an idiot o.o

Author's response

hm... I did that 'cut' on purpose (as nothing really happens between her following Julius and meeting Al) but reading it again it does look a but unharmonious... I'll see what I can do about this.