Dude. My advice would be to just repost this. No offense, but you don't have all that many reviews to lose, and I'll still review it once you repost it. The reason I say this is because ficwad fucked your story up. The links don't work right and I can't get to some of the chapters. This is why I suggest you repost it. I'll look for it again under your name if you decide to do so. From what I've read so far, I really like the story, though your grammar is off in just a few places. ^.^
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The only problem I have found is chapter 7. I'm trying to fix that now.
I re-posted the chapter, but it won't let me take it out of the chapter 12 spot. It should be at the seven hole.