i like the myrtle part never saw that before,i like harrys attitude keep it going .your last 2 chapters are reversed
Author's response
I know about the chapter problem, but ficwad is not letting me move those two chapters around. I've already reported it, and am holding off on posting chapters 6 and 7 until whatever the problem is can be resolved. (As you might expect, I posted chapter 5 after chapter 4, so them appearing like that makes me wary of posting more until it's fixed.)
Thanks for the comments about Myrtle. I hadn't seen it before either (though I'm sure someone somewhere has done something like it), plus it kinda wrote itself, if you know what I mean.