Review for You're my what?

You're my what?

(#) jabarber69 2009-05-17

so I take it since harry added unknownling one of his hairs in tonks new wand, and it was her that hit volide with the reductor and blew a hole into him that started the whole chain gang thingy that eventually killed him and is deatheaters he was drained their magic while trying to save his life thingy, even though he wasnt their he still killed volide with his hair which is a magical core of a wand that killed him...damn this is a catch 22 type thing, interesting story but why the sudden paling of the girls, or did they thing that they would have several more years of fooling around and having sex before they became the baby making machines of legend! and you said their is a sequel, so I take it volide isnt dead? is there more horcruxes or something.... and what about dumby wand, that bones incinerated, was that the elder wand?

Author's response

Coming up with a new way to kill Voldemort while staying within the prophecy was an interesting mental exercise.

The snake mentioned by the security guard was Nagini and was the last of the Horcruxes to be destroyed.

The Death Eaters didn't die, they lost their magical core. A fate far worse in most of their opinions. That little bit will appear in the sequel.

As for the girls paling.... They were happy dealing with having babies in the abstract, "Some time after we finish schooling I'll have a few babies". Suddenly it became one of us is going to be pregnant tomorrow morning. Thinking through the implications to their schooling and everyday life caused them to become pale.

I'd also like to thank everyone for their kind words and advice. I've improved because people took the time to be critical but not mean in their reviews. Thanks to all.