Review for Hold Out

Hold Out

(#) FFTV 2009-05-23 01:46:14 PM

One thing I loved about this was the fact that it began and ended on the same page. I have a soft spot for stories that pick up on one line and fade out on the same. It was a very good piece. My only comment is that things are so close together. Is it possible for it to be double spaced? Makes things much easier to read.

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