Review for Waiting

Waiting

(#) cratbro 2009-05-29 11:47:25 AM

Original as far as IZ stories go for sure, but the grammar could be fixed up and the story extended. By extended, I mean making this chapter longer, though after that a second chapter would be welcome. :)

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