Review for When A Man Loves A Woman

When A Man Loves A Woman

(#) Crucio_Crusade 2006-08-31 09:03:20 AM

I like your story. You might want to revise the first chapter though. The readers might get confuse between the first meeting of Prongs and Padfoot.

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