Okay, normally I avoid these types of stories like the plague, because...normally, they're pretty bad, cheesy, OTT. I didn't like that you took what could have been an entirely different ORIGINAL piece and made it Frank's POV, but that's personal choice. So, I didn't love it or LIKE LIKE LIKE it, but the slight rhythm gives it charm. And I can see the potential, very much so.
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Well everyone has their opinions..Thank you reviewing still.