Really cause i LOVED this!!!! Haha sorry i was just reading the other persons review. I liked the rhythm i think it added a lot to it. The story was so sad too, poor Frankie. Well i enjoyed it, i think your a very good writer!
Author's response
Aww thank you. Yeah I thought this was pretty much garbage, but thank you so much for reviewing (: I appreciate that very much (:
-Lynai.