Review for Harry's Heritage
FicWad in general doesn't seem to like me, as this sentence should have a blank line between it and the URL. Betcha it doesn't.
As for the telegraphic nature of the story - I will admit that is perhaps a failing from some points of view. It's almost more of a scene from a larger story, than a full story in and of itself. I do have plans to expand the story, and this will turn into but a scene in that story - one of the opening scenes, but just a scene.
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Ryuzaki finds out what its like to like like a girl. But his first crush has a major downfall; the f...
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Just saying thank you and goodbye :)