Review for Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

Like A Dark Lord Only Crunchy

(#) qiaoyech 2009-07-08 05:15:43 PM

Well... I think other than occasional spelling and grammar errors your story is fine. It's a bit too early to tell though. I can't judge a story unless it contains at least 40,000 words.

I hope there would be more sophisticated plots as the story goes on.

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