Review for Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix

Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix

(#) jsdailey 2009-07-12 07:05:26 PM

How often do you think you'll be able to update. I'll review each time, if it helps with motivation.

The style is spot on. Harry's character, for what changes in his purpose you made, is consistent with what I'd expect. I imagine most of my questions will be answered in the next chapter, when Harry meets Snape and Flitwick, so I'll save any until then!

Keep up the good work!

jd

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