Review for Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
The style is spot on. Harry's character, for what changes in his purpose you made, is consistent with what I'd expect. I imagine most of my questions will be answered in the next chapter, when Harry meets Snape and Flitwick, so I'll save any until then!
Keep up the good work!
Beginning of the summer Moody gives Harry many magical books that start our Wizarding hero on his ad...
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Hello friends if you remember me you reALLY NEED TO READ THIS RIGHT NOW DO IT
I think you were right. I think you had a point there.
I promised you that I would always remember. Things like that, well they don't just fade away.
REWRITE IN PROGRESS In a world where nightmares have become reality, Jack is just trying to survive ...
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