Review for The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-09-03

Fantastic update, it's getting a bit tough to keep track of all of the children. I think it's interesting that Ginny's letter was 'mistakenly' sorted in with the fan mail, when in reality she worships the ground the BWL walks on. I don't really like fan!Ginny, but I do sympathize with her to an extent.

It's refreshing to see someone have multiple women besides Harry, and who does the concept fit better than Sirius? No one, that's who.

Looking forward to your next update. Poor Bonnie...Harry's leaving.

Author's response

Yes, a lot of kids, but with the age differences, they're all segmented into their own groups. I think it'll make more sense in the long run. Yea, I also wanted to get over the fact that it's tough to get in touch with Harry, once they'd straightened that out she was able to get in touch easier. Especially with how I've brought along Narcissa, Sirius was the only choice. And I couldn't stand her not having another child especially living in such a loving family environment. They're a very secluded family group, so meeting others wasn't really an option. First time they'll be apart in their short lives, I definitely wanted to touch on that fact as you'll see in CH 6.