Review for Caught Up In This Web

Caught Up In This Web

(#) Sassy 2009-07-21 02:08:26 PM

Hmmm... what's with that scary dream? Is there more to it than meets the eye??? I wonder!

This is going to come out all wrong , I know, but I like the way you have written character traits allowing for the large age difference. I'm not saying one's childish or anything, just that, well, as you get older, you do tend to lose the 'free spirit' feeling. The guys won't be all boring and sensible (no one should be!!) but there will always be a slight difference in how they react - especially at first when they don't know you all that well. I think you captured that perfectly!

Sas x

ps notice the story from the main menu is now green? ;)

Author's response

I totally get what you're saying, sort or. It'll come to me a lot better when I reread it over and over ^^ Teen minds are very confusing!

And yesh, I've noticed the greenness.. and my penis senses are tingling! I dunno..just thought of that LoL

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