Review for Caught Up In This Web
This is going to come out all wrong , I know, but I like the way you have written character traits allowing for the large age difference. I'm not saying one's childish or anything, just that, well, as you get older, you do tend to lose the 'free spirit' feeling. The guys won't be all boring and sensible (no one should be!!) but there will always be a slight difference in how they react - especially at first when they don't know you all that well. I think you captured that perfectly!
ps notice the story from the main menu is now green? ;)
And yesh, I've noticed the greenness.. and my penis senses are tingling! I dunno..just thought of that LoL
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