Review for The Thief of Hogwarts

The Thief of Hogwarts

(#) odonata617 2009-07-22

Btw, revisiting the first several paragraphs, I think some of the expressions used are a bit awkward. First, "at" the staff table rather than "in." Second, not "to" the plans. Better to come up "with" the plans (I don't have the text in front of me so I can't offer up a tidier suggestion). Looking forward to the next bit.