Jaebi_Lit has mostly the right of it, although I'm more forgiving perhaps. Still I'd like to see the style cleaned up just a little.
It's not jack tellng the tale though, is it- some mate of his swapping the story for a pot of ale.
Sweet though. I like the way the stories are being told- The stories that were only hinted at in the film.
"Are none of them true then?"
"No" he said, and pulled his shirt aside to show the bullet scars; "None at all."