Review for Harry Potter and the News

Harry Potter and the News

(#) divad 2009-07-27

this story is fantastic I'm sure that you already have it ploted out more or less but I'm going to suggest things anyway cause that is what makes reviewing fun. I think that harry should stop with six or seven girls because seven is a magical number of power. With six girls there are seven people bound together and with seven he has seven power sources connected to him. If he were to go over that number he might actually weaken himself until he reached another similarly significant number wich would just be to many girls. Also how does he gain power from them is it that he leaches off them or is it that the connection actually generates power in a kind of positive feed back loop or something like that. I really want to see a scene where ginny and harry talk and it is at least partialy revealed to ginny what he is doing and she says to him that she is willing to become one of his girls to help him win and he is all "no I couldn't force you to love me" and she says "harry my father and/or mother taught me that real love isn't the butterflys in your stomach it is choosing to act for the well being of the person you have commited yourself to, this is me choosing"