Review for Borderline


(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-03 01:13:47 PM

Ack! Sorry bout that..I used my old account lol
that one above is meeeee!

Author's response

Ohhh okay. So I was thinking Ash would be just a guy Frank knew in the past. Like, he'll be in the story more than this, when Frank has other flashbacks.

I just think it'll work out better because if everyone is at the hospital, it sort of makes it hard to give them all important parts. This way, Ash is an important part of the story, but he's also like different from the rest of the characters.

I dunno, do you want him to be in the hospital, because I can write that if you really want. Your choice.

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