It is hard to read this because the formatting has all these symbols instead of speech marks.
However, this is very humourous, and you are also very good with description. I can really picture what is happening.
I really enjoyed this.
...symbols instead of speech marks? Still? I thought I solved that when I replugged all the quotes in...looks at it on screen Erk. And it's fine on my screen...anyone else having this problem? puzzled and aggrivated
Glad you liked it at any rate...