Review for A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-08-30

yay first to review.

Loved the last line.

"It's a lot like chicken."

AHAHAHA!

oh no... what is going to become of Pete?

Update soon pretty please. NO wonder this story is saved in my favorites, it's brilliant!

Author's response

Wow!! Thanks for the compliment, I am VERY flattered!! :D

I couldn't help myself with that line! And I figured it might be the sort of thing he might say :)

Pete is in trouble isn't he. Desperate to please his 'master', but he's so confused right now.

More soon, I promise!
Sas x