Review for Fate's Revenge

Fate's Revenge

(#) RAJR 2009-09-03

Hi!
I have read through all of the story thus far, as I just found it on here, and I must say, that I have enjoyed it alot so far. I don't think I've ever seen a fic with this kind of a spin on the Potter verse. I am anxious to se how the story develops as yor creative juices churn out more interesting chapters. The one thing I will ask of you though, is to please make the chapters at least somewat substantial in size. Some writers think that 5 minutes of reading is an adequate chapter size. Longer chapters make the story last longer, n usually include more details, which in turn, makes the story all that more enjoyable for the readers. My congradulations on a storywell written thus far, and keep up the good work!
P.S. pass on a message to that Tumshie person please. Ask them if they are gonna do anymore writing on their story Independence Day, or is it another story gone down the drain? Thanks much!

Author's response

Hello RAJR,

Thanks for the review.
Re the length of chapters, my other story has chapters that weigh in at 15000 words and people complained, that the chapters are too long. This story has chapters half that length, and now the opposite is happening ie requests to make the chapters longer. I'll never win, i guess. :)

Tumshie is hopeful at continuing Independence Day someday muse willing.

I am glad that you enjoyed the story so far.

Regards,
Lancelot47