Review for Dreams of Fighting
Dreams of Fighting
(#) syncretic_routine 2005-12-27 07:00:29 AM
I like this, because it really is a neat concept. It's gen-fic! I love you!
This needs a bit more detail throughout the piece though, with all five senses - smell, sound, taste, you know - it also makes me think it's just a small part of a greater whole, like there's more that's just not posted yet.
This needs a bit more detail throughout the piece though, with all five senses - smell, sound, taste, you know - it also makes me think it's just a small part of a greater whole, like there's more that's just not posted yet.
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