Review for Overlooked

Overlooked

(#) IWCT 2009-09-15 06:21:23 PM

I had a lot of fun reading this. Nice piece of gen fluff. If you have any plans to continue this story I would definitely do so. The writing style was not conclusive enough for a one-shot, though you tried to wrap things up at the end with "Hinata was used to being over-looked." But the information that Naruto is free on Saturday leaves a massive tail dangling that needs to be played with. Have fun with this piece if you have a good idea about what happens next. If not, it's still a great piece of writing with a lot of happy gen fluff to recommend it.

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