Review for Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
Though hot smutty action is never a bad thing. ;)
I disagree with how you view the British Wizarding World (I've seen nothing in canon to indicate that women are marginalized), but its still a valid viewpoint and makes for some good foreground conflict until Moldyshorts comes into play.
Please update soon! :)
Next chapters (Tangent and Path) should be along more quickly than the last few- this one was a complicated puzzle to assemble. Thanks for the review and hanging in there with me!
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Just saying thank you and goodbye :)