Review for Summer 4th year Revised
As for a real review, I'd like to see more characterization and growth between Harry and Hermione as well as the various other characters and I'd like to be shown more things instead of told that they were happening.
This is true of most of your stories.
After Harry and Ron die, Hermione must learn to live without them. Hermione, Luna, Ginny. Gen.
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