Review for Summer 4th year Revised

Summer 4th year Revised

(#) Godogma 2009-09-26 02:45:36 PM

I'd like to see the rest of the story. Please continue.

As for a real review, I'd like to see more characterization and growth between Harry and Hermione as well as the various other characters and I'd like to be shown more things instead of told that they were happening.

This is true of most of your stories.

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