Review for Forgotten Place
Forgotten Place
(#) oxdikeyatbestxo 2009-11-17 08:36:57 AM
haha, I feel incredibly dumb for not realizing each line started with the next letter of the alphabet. Anyway, I really like this! It all seems to really work together well, and is really descriptive. The last line is a bit lame, ha, but I don't blame you- not very many words start with Z.
Author's response
That's okay. A bunch of people I showed it to didn't notice either XD
Thanks for reviewing! And yeah, I even looked at an online dictionary and couldn't find anything I could use for Z lol
Thanks for reviewing! And yeah, I even looked at an online dictionary and couldn't find anything I could use for Z lol
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