Clell,
I can't remember if I reviewed the first chap... shame on me if I haven't.
It's great to see you embark on another long story, and I like your take on the harem and bond angles. I'm a little surprised it's taken Hermione so long to come around, and that Harry and his wives haven't spent more time (that we've seen) trying to figure out Dumbles purpose. Partly, I'm annoyed that you haven't used that to give US some clues.
Anyhow, the intra-marital dynamics continue to amuse, Snape and Malfoy getting slaped down is always good. No plans to get smuttier? Ah, maybe orgasms of that level are best left to the imagination.
Thanks for sharing.
Take care-
-Rijl