(#) Ryuko 2006-01-01
Very nice! I really did enjoy that story. It was sad, thought-provoking, and almost romantic. The only thing that I could ever say was wrong is that you sometimes seemed to go a little off topic. But not by much.
By the way... I accidentally clicked "funny" when I was rating it. I wanted to hit "moving". x.x Sorry. >.< is a klutz
Author\'s Response: That's okay. XD Thanks for the comments. ^^