Review for Fast Times At Belleville High [completely rewritten.]

Fast Times At Belleville High [completely rewritten.]

(#) thegayestgoth 2010-01-04 01:16:41 PM

ASDFASLJDFNAKSDNMF;JKAJKAG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Oh, that Midol comment was so mean...I'd NEVER say something like that in real life it it were me, you know? I love it though. This Vaughnjareya character is pretty interesting. I'm digging the name. Where'd you get it? You're so creative. And Ray is so funny, after his boyfriend threatens to smack Frankie He's all, "Oh, you light up my day..."

I'm a DIGGING this story. I'm sitting here in the library, trying not to laugh out loud and failing miserably, and everyone keeps staring. Well, at least I'm not at the Wesley and interuppting the worship service. i think Rev. was starting to get annoyed.

Everyone always wants to know whats so funny, but even if they read it they don't get it...you know, un-MCR fans. yawn.

I LOVE this:

"'Mikey’s POV

I want….some bean dip.

Gerard’s POV

I’ll tell you what I want, what I really really want. So tell me what you want, whatcha really really want….

Bob’s POV

Oh I’m a gummy bear, yes I’m a gummy bear.'"

Bob is quite confident about his gummibearness-being. Good for him. I wish there were more people in the world that were so confident about that part of their personality. I should go buy some!!!

And as for that Luma...damn! She is a scary smartass!!!!!

Onto chapter 3!!! Pressing CTRL+P now, I HAVE to take this home...

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