Review for Caught Up In This Web
(#) Mo_Was_Here 2010-01-18 12:18:40 PM
and it was really great! you should totally have made Gerard have a hard on. i would have laughed so much that i'd die.
AND TWO UPDATES IN TWO DAYS?! DAMN! keep em rolling betcch :)
Ahhhh updating so much makes my head hurt! I had such horrible nightmares last night.. I had a dream that ALL my chapters weren't green anymore, and then a bunch of people hated this one and sent me hate mail >.>
Oh! I almost forgot to tell you.. that originally.. I had put "I straddle him fully blah blah blah. His hands rub down to my hips and he grinds against me, the bulge in his pants pressing erotically against my thigh" but, well.. I didn't like it. So hah!
It's been 10 years, but these wounds don't seem to heal.
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While Goten, Gohan and Trunks were forced to train with Vegeta in the Gravity Chamber, Pan was left ...
In: Dragon Ball Z
They give her a new lease of life, now she owes them
Where do you want to go to? Heaven? Or maybe Hell? Make your choice.
It's our life. We make our own decisions and sometie our own path.