Review for Summer 4th year Revised

Summer 4th year Revised

(#) Dalwyn 2010-01-23

I'm glad to hear you're trying a sequel ... this is a really good story so far, "so far" in the sense that you've now created characters rather different than those we've seen elsewhere, but left them (or us) hanging. As another reviewer commented it will be interesting to see how they survive the year with moRon, Dumbles and Snipe. Thanks for writing.