Review for Get me closer (to God)
Get me closer (to God)
(#) mysilentromance 2010-02-09 01:38:02 PM
The whole idea of the two souls bonding together is brilliant! You could have easily just gotten the ritual over with, but you made it more complex. And that was a very interesting choice that you made.
Also, your author's note has gotten me even more excited for the next chapters ;)
Also, your author's note has gotten me even more excited for the next chapters ;)
Author's response
Not as excited as I am ;] And I'm glad you like the bonding thing, I wasn't sure if it was too heavy - but then I wanted there to be some justification for having Gee molest someone on a daily basis.
Though really, who cares about justification? ;]
xox
Though really, who cares about justification? ;]
xox
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