Review for Portals, Steam and Magic
Portals, Steam and Magic
(#) Cateagle 2010-02-14 08:00:01 AM
This does flow a bit smoother and is an enjoyable read; I'm quite enjoying it. It does need a bit of a run through a beta as there are spelling errors as well as the occassional dropped word, forex. "...Hermione Potter, nee." should be "...Hermione Potter, nee Granger.". Still, it's an excellent concept that you're developing nicely and I look forward to more.
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0
Featured Story
-
The Real Epilogue
by DrT (R)There was much more to 'The Epilogue' than was shown in Book 7.
In: Harry Potter
Site Stats
- Authors: 198055
- Stories: 39117
Recent Stories
-
Dear Relapse
by IsolabellaFae (G)This also sucks, but I feel like it started decently.
In: Poetry
-
Complicated
by IsolabellaFae (G)Not really sure what this is.Had a good idea and took it somewhere crazy.Sorry
In: Poetry
-
Come Back
by IsolabellaFae (G)In: Poetry
-
115
by IsolabellaFae (G)The motivation to do anything to be beautiful.Just to feel it for a second.To know what it's like.
In: Poetry
-
Friendship Kills
by Axel_Insanity (PG-13)It's hard being best friends with a killer, but Desmond has managed so far, its not until he finds o...
In: Horror