That was great, extra bit of drama. Touch of excitment. I want to read more...
I think you should add Frank into it more, (Not saying its not great without him; but it would be nice to see some of is humour, expecially at really inappropriate time. That would be funny.
Good chapter ^^
Author's response
tehe thank you! I'll update soon!
Frank will be in it some more, as will the other guys.
Thank you for the review!
Lu