As per usual, this is epic.
You're such a shamazing author, there are not even words.
I liked the whole thing with the tree, that's cool :P
JESUS GOD PETE IS SUCH A DICK.
COME ON NOW PETER.
COME ON.
Holy god.
Okay, well, yeah, uber awesome. ^^
You should write the next chappy asap, and post it, and when you finish this story i will be all :o proudness. lol.
Author's response
Yay, I liked the tree too. ^^ I was trying to personify it, but I dunno if it worked. And of course, Pete's always the dick. If he ever read what I'm writing here, he'd probably hate me. But whatever. I don't care. HE CAN HATE ME BECAUSE I HATE HIM. END OF STORY.
Wow. I sound retarded. :P
And I do have the next chappy almost done. I has to edit it. :P