Nah, I like it. I think you should just write for yourself, do what makes you happy. Yeah, it's nice to have other people comment on it or whatever but just keep writing until you're happy.
If I'm not mistaken (which I probably am) if you happen to be an Elliot Minor fan, I salute you!
And instead of making like one page reallyyyyy long, you could always just do them in like chapters, as in when you click on "add chapter" and it's like a different page.
Anyway! More soon? ^_^
F oxox.