Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) twilliams1797 2010-04-01 02:26:54 PM

one such abuse of children in the UK would be the Magdalene laundries..

What you have written here and in ch1 bring the focus in clearly on that which I want to write,
quite nicely done.

Author's response

Haya Tim.

I did not know about the Magdalene Laundries. I was actually thing more about the Triangle Co. factory. Half the women who died there were children. There were also the shoe factories, in which many thousands of children were injured, maimed or even killed...all for profit. The upside to that was that the unions got a foothold.

I used 'Oliver' and 'Annie' because they were more easily recognizable examples.

If you've gotten an idea, then "Write-on, man!'


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