Review for The Unmentionables...?

The Unmentionables...?

(#) LabRat 2010-04-12

Does Dobby have to smack a bitch?

The descriptions of Pansy were disgusting.

Pimp Dobby was hilarious, and Harry should have known that he wasn't to touch the Pimp Juice.

Author's response

Good Disgusting?

or Bad writer, poor style disgusting?

And yes. Yes Dobby had to smack a bitch. She was mouthing off.

Honestly, the whole elf thing always smacked more of pimp/prostitute vs master/slave to me.

But the pimp is so strong, the ho's smack themself...