Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) wolf550e 2010-04-27 07:20:31 PM

The thing missing in this story is conflict. Harry got a major powerup in brains, knowledge and skills while the rest of the cast are at the same level JKR made them so that a stupid protagonist would have a chance to win by luck. Also, Harry has future knowledge that is still valid, making everything infinitely easier.

By telling instead of showing, I can write a story with this premise and have the whole thing wrapped up in a single chapter. But it would be boring!

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