Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) Cateagle 2010-05-11

If there wasn't griping in the ranks, the officers would be worried. I do like the idea of Harry and Neville complimenting each other's background and abilities; they can train each other, sharpening themselves in the process, and, in the meantime, it means that exceedingly few items will "slip through the cracks".

Oh, my comment about the insurance was a temporary confusion with another good fic out there, though I misremember which one at this point.

Author's response

~If there wasn't griping in the ranks, the officers would be worried.~

But that's the fun part!

Harry and Neville will be good friends, and as I've indicated, Neville will be one of Harry's lieutenants.

Too many authors have Harry facing impossible odds alone, and through some 'Deus ex Machina', overcoming. It usually don't work that way. That's why I had Harry hire his support staff.

Each of the people I include will have a part to play, large or small, in the defeat of both dark lords.

Alorkin