you should write books. do you write books? you should really do it. short stories. anything. you have talent, in my opinion. that's the second story of you I read and I love it. it's so long ago that… no wait. I have NEVER read out-of-my-fandoms stories on the internet before, and I really should change that, as yours makes me feel like I'm reading a book, watching a movie even too.
this one is written so charmingly, it's like you're listening to someone telling you a story that happened long time ago…
and, again, your humour:
- '…you mention it to no one in particular as you walk . . ."'
=D
also liked the 'pseudo-depressive hack poets ' ;-)