Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) erik 2010-05-25 10:38:19 AM

Interesting changes to the Tournament, but it's coming across as rushed.

I am still enjoying it, thanks.

Author's response

Erik (and noylj et al) Rushed? Not at all. Undeveloped, yes; much more about a few plot elements I wanted to explore, v. little about character, which I've done in over-exacting detail at times before.

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