First seriously what is with your fascination with someones back door or butt hole. This whole story seems to be centered around everyone getting a burrito or a butt plug up there back door. Second I am 100 percent sure harry does not use ebonics (lets be about it) I have read a lot of story's and this is the first one I have ever seen with ebonics (lets be about it) in a number of chapters. Third one of the chapters is a certified train wreck one paragraph is repeated twice and thats the end of that chapter. The first sentence in most chapters are repeated twice with the occasional AN in the middle between the repeated lines. There are also big english grammar problems. I am sorry if you think this is a flame in truth its not but you do have a lot of work to do to clean this story up and I might add find another sexual activity for the story other than there back door or butt hole.