Review for Phoenix Eclipse

Phoenix Eclipse

(#) Nautilus 2010-06-02

you big meanie... how do you live with yourself... ending that chapter at THAT moment.

great work on the character development of hermione, ginny and 'BWL'... nice to see a the change in hermione...

hala's comment about Shyamal was interesting... and the glare at ginny?

nice work with the 'attack' on professor snape... nicely planned and well described... i do wonder what your snape will make of it... an accident or something more?

playing in edwards mind was thoroughly entertaining.. and nice to see him realise some home truths... what will he do now.. will he be man enough to change, now that he has been able to ID some of his flaws.

looking forward to the battle scene. and also how Shyamal goes about scanning sirius's badge... what signifance does having voldy's magical signature hold?

can't wait for the next chappy.

Author's response

I can live with myself knowing i made the deadline. Damn thing wouldn't stop growing either way. 22 pages should more than enough to make up for the last chapter. BWL should be growing up more even though he might make some stumbles.

Oh, man what would you do if someone was looking at your older brother who you dote on to be there for you.

What do you think Snape always does? Blame it on the Potter spawn.

Shyamal will be too busying doing something but someone else will get a shot at it. You're going to have to wait for that last question!

Thanks for the review!