Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) brad 2010-06-10 12:28:18 AM

I really had no idea what was happening with Yaxley until pretty much the last line. A nice application of an Imperius! And a bit of a shock to see it employed by the 'good guys'. Well, hit-man Harry, someone I'm still feeling dubious about (even if our Hermione is solidly in his court!).

The death of the three students was much more farcical, of course.

Snape putting Harry's name into the goblet and Harry Draco's was amusing. If there is any real danger to the contestants - and there is, isn't there? - then this is another count against Harry as being 'evil', deliberately putting Malfoy in danger.

But it is Draco, hmmm ... :-)

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