I accidentally stumbled onto this story and I read it twice in a row. You have such a fantastic handling of tone and such sincere character development. Your voice is very clear throughout the piece. I am really excited to see what happens with Olivia simply because she has become such a multifaceted character. You clearly are a writer and not some crazed 13 year old. I have seen this as more of a story than a "fanfic." I can't wait to read all of your work. Cant wait for the next update!
Thank you so much! That means alot!