Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) keichan2 2010-07-02 10:31:25 AM

It was Dobby?!?! I can't believe it! (I thought it would be Tonks...)

And the hat's song... I can really see Minerva hyperventilating after something like this :-D

"GUY WITH MORE TITLES THAN YOU" Excellent :-D

I was honestly expecting Albus to find himself trapped in the Floo by some security measure... I can't imagine Bones as a minister not protecting her office... Must have been an inheritance from Fudge...

Anyway, thanks for the new chapter, and I hope to read more soon!

Author's response

Naah, it wouldn't be Tonks. She merely 'dislikes' him.

Now, Dobby...

I had a lot of fun making up that song. Minerva is aware of what 's going to happen, but still, something like that would definitely shake her.

Either that, or she was laughing so hard, she couldn't breathe.

"GUY WITH MORE TITLES THAN YOU" Excellent :-D

Thanks. Since Dumbley is so hung up on his status, saying that would be the fastest way to get under his skin.

She left the floo open on purpose. They wanted him there to make an ass of himself.

Thanks for your feedback. Next chapter should be up on Friday.

Alorkin

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