Review for The Mistake:Revised

The Mistake:Revised

(#) BJH 2010-07-09 01:49:13 PM

Interesting story, I hope you update soon. I like how all the Weasleys gathered around Hermione and not one gave Harry even the slightest chance to explain the situation. I also liked how it was Sirius who gave him the chance for anonymity, although that does sort of clash with the whole "taking over the US MLE" and gethering a whole new set of headlines. I think you need to pick one path or the other there, either Harry is well known in the States as a crimefighter or he is anonymous.

BJH

Author's response

Thanks for the review, the thing about Harry is that fame will always follow him. I wanted to start it off as in he didn't want to be the one to tell them. They had to find out from somewhere else, shows how far the breach has come.

In the coming chapters, it'll become apparent about Harry's personality, what'll come of it.

Hope you continue reading, when I get the next couple of chapters up!

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