Review for What He'll Sorely Miss?

What He'll Sorely Miss?

(#) Cateagle 2010-07-19 08:28:08 PM

Not too sappy at all; you nailed the scene between H and HR exceedingly well, IMHO. Such scenes are bound to be uncomfortable, at any age, because there's a lot on the line for both parties and opening up like that is never easy.

Bravo!! for a most well-done chapter.

Author's response

You're right; whether they'd been 14 or 34, that moment still would have been at least a bit uncomfortable.

Glad you liked it.

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