Review for What He'll Sorely Miss?
What He'll Sorely Miss?
(#) Cateagle 2010-07-19 08:28:08 PM
Not too sappy at all; you nailed the scene between H and HR exceedingly well, IMHO. Such scenes are bound to be uncomfortable, at any age, because there's a lot on the line for both parties and opening up like that is never easy.
Bravo!! for a most well-done chapter.
Bravo!! for a most well-done chapter.
Author's response
You're right; whether they'd been 14 or 34, that moment still would have been at least a bit uncomfortable.
Glad you liked it.
Glad you liked it.
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